IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 6.5

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the cost of water in 5 cities in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. You should write at least 150 words.
#minutes #cost #water #cities #australia #summarise #information #features
The given table illustrates the price of water in
Adelaid
Correct your spelling
Adelaide
,Brisbane,Melbourne,
Perth
 and,
Sydney
 which are located in Australia ranging
the
Change preposition
in the
show examples
 amount of money which is paid for per
kl
 Up to 125Kl and above 125KL.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Perth
 has experienced the highest number of average
bill
Fix the agreement mistake
bills
show examples
with
slightly
Change the adverb
slight
show examples
 differences and Melbourn has witnessed the lowest payment. In terms of exploiting water up to 125kl, meanwhile, all 5 cities depicted under 1$ payment,
Sydney
 has the highest cost at 0.98$ which is
following
Wrong verb form
followed
show examples
 by Brisbane and
Melborn
Correct your spelling
Melbourne
 at 0.81$ and 0.78$ respectively.
Also
,
Perth
 and Adelaide
has
Change the verb form
have
show examples
experiensed
Correct your spelling
experienced
experience
equivalent
Correct article usage
an equivalent
show examples
 number stood at 0.42$. Regarding usage
more
Change preposition
of more
show examples
 than 12KL,
Perth
is
Verb problem
has
show examples
 demonstrated the significant paid for money
that is
 dramatically more than four other cities.
Furthermore
,
Adelaid
Correct your spelling
Adelaide
 and
Sydney
 are placed in
Correct article usage
the secound
show examples
secound
Correct your spelling
second
 and third
situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
show examples
 with minimal differences at 1.00$ and 0.98$ respectively.
Interstingly
Correct your spelling
Interestingly
,Melbourne and
Sydney
 have shown
corresponded
Replace the word
corresponding
show examples
cost
Fix the agreement mistake
costs
show examples
 in both
range
Change to a plural noun
ranges
show examples
.
However
,Brisbane has
witneesed
Correct your spelling
witnessed
 minimal increasing about merely 0.03$.
Submitted by Maral.qanbarii1992 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words perth, sydney, kl with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: