Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city. While others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places.

While

a faction of

people

holds the notion that

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countrysides

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are

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the best place to grow

up

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juveniles

, others argue that metropolitan

cities

are suitable for them.

This

essay will delve into both viewpoints with relevant illustrations. First and foremost, one of the obvious advantages of the

cities

for the young

people

to grow up is the accessibility of facilities.

In other words

, the

people

who

living

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in

cities

can

easly

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easily

access

facilites

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facilities

such

as libraries and sports

centers

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for their academic

as well as

lifestyle purposes.

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, around three thousand sports

facilites

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facilities

are available in the metropolitan area

in

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Dubai.

Similarly

, the students can

easly

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easily

access to high standard schools as renowned school campuses are located in

cities

around the globe. The main disadvantage of

cities

is the fast-paced lifestyle. Since the parents in urban

areas

would have

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hectic lifestyle,

juveniles

might feel isolated and

depend

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online platforms like Facebook to connect

people

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with people

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which may

detrimental

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for

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their studies.

On the other hand

,

major

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advantage

in

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the

countryside

is less pollution compared to urban

areas

. In detail, the children who grow up in rural

areas

can enjoy not only fresh air but

also

fresh water.

Moreover

, the

countryside

would have more green space which will help for the physical and mental well-being of

juveniles

. For

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, it is true that, in the

countryside

,

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carbon emission rate is much lower than

cities

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in cities

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. The demerit of the children

raise

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in the

countryside

is

difficulty

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the difficulty

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to commute

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in commuting

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to educational institutions. Since few academic facilities are available in

the

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apply

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rural

areas

, the

juveniles

may commute to longer

distance

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distances

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for schooling. In conclusion, accessibility of facilities is the major advantage of the

cities

for

juveniles

,

however

, isolation and overuse of online media are the considerable disadvantages.

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level of pollution is the main attraction in the

countryside

, ergo,

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to school is a challenge

in

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the students of

this

area.