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The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented bar chart illustrates how much income per year was earned by
the
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US households in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there has not been much change over the period.
While
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 the number of families who earned 100000 USD or more reached a peak
at the end
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 of the given time, people who received between $75000 and $99,999 was less than others in all mentioned years. In detail, the number of households earning less than fifty
million
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 dollars was between 25
m
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million
 and 30
m
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million
 in all three years,
while
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 by 2011, it reached around 30
million
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.
Moreover
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, the total population of
the
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US families with an annual salary from 50000 USD to $75000 and 75k USD to a hundred thousand dollars was about 20
million
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 and almost 15
million
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 respectively in all the given time.
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, a group with more than $100000 experienced a gradual rise over the period and reached 33
million
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 people, despite a slight decline to 27
m
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million
 in 2011.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • household income
  • economic fluctuations
  • income brackets
  • economic downturns
  • economic growth
  • global financial crisis
  • recovery
  • middle-income bracket
  • trends
  • proportion
  • stability
  • stagnation
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