The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011, and 2016.

The chart shows the percentage of people in one country, by age group, who visited one or more museums in 2006, 2011, and 2016.
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The bar chart compares the percentage of different age groups of people who visited at least one museum in three different
years
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the percentage of the population who were 65
years
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old or older has been less interested in visiting museums,
while
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those between 55 and 64
years
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old were more interested.
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, the most significant change is related to dwellers who are 35-44
years
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old. Looking at the youngest group (15-24
years
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old), there was no considerable change in three separate
years
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.
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, the figure for the two groups of 25-34 and 35-44
years
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experienced a striking rise, especially for the latter group, making it in 2016 about two times as high as in 2006. Regarding older groups,
although
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the residents between 45 and 54
years
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old were more interested in visiting the museums, the trend for those aged 55 to 64 decreased, reaching about one-third of the total number of visitors.
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, those older than 65
years
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were the least interested in going to the museums even for one time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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