Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books, while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There has been a
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debate about the future of
paper
books
. Some groups of
people
argue that
e-
books
will
subtitute
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substitute
paper
books
completely.
On the other hand
,
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others think that
paper
books
will be
long lasting
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.
This
essay will elaborate
further
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these mindsets.
To begin
with, some
people
who are
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supporter
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supporters
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of
e-
books
think that
e-
books
give a lot of advantages compared to
paper
books
.
First,
e-
books
are cheaper than
paper
books
because of the lower cost in
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terms
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of production.
While
producing
paper
books
needs physical materials
such
as ink and
papers
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paper
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,
e-
books
are duplicated with almost zero money.
In addition
,
e-
books
is
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more
environmental
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friendly.
This
is
due to
the abundant usage of
papers
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paper
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in multiplying
paper
books
which means that there will be a lot of trees being cut to print
paper
books
.
In contrast
, some
people
who are loyal
with
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paper
books
cannot defy the
comfortness
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comforts
which
paper
books
offer.
Firstly
, some individuals, particularly the
one
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who had grown
with
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paper
books
, are loyal
with
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the feeling of handling
paper
books
. They love the crisp sound when the pages are turned and the aroma of the
paper
.
Secondly
, reading
paper
books
gives less burden to the reader's eyes compared to reading
e-
books
.
As a result
,
people
who are the lover of
paper
books
claim that they can read
paper
books
longer than
e-
books
. Personally, I definitely agree with the side that pushes
e-
books
to replace
paper
books
.
This
is because I can achieve the same knowledge of the
books
with
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cheaper
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price and support our environment by reducing the usage of
papers
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paper
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. Had I been stubborn with
paper
books
, I would not have as much money as I have now.
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task achievement
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coherence cohesion
Enhance coherence by improving transitions between paragraphs. Using more diverse and clear linking phrases can guide the reader through your argument more smoothly.
coherence cohesion
For cohesion, aim to refer back to your main argument or opinion throughout the body paragraphs. This ties your observations and examples back to the central thesis, strengthening the overall unity of the essay.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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