The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the growth of industrial
area's
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areas
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now and planned in the
future
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of the site.
Overall
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, there are many facilities
increase
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in the site of
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plan
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planned
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future
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development
such
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as
playground
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playgrounds
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, medical
checkup
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checkups
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,
school
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schools
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, and
shops
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.
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, the factory will
replace
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with residential complexes and the street will be added in the
future
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.
To begin
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with, the middle of
map
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the map
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in the Norbiton industrial
area's now have
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eight factories. The east of
factories
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the factories
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will
be replace
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with
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by
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school
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schools
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and the southwest of the roundabout changed by
shops
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,
while
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others
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factories will change to
be
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apply
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housing in the
future
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. The farmland will change with
house
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a house
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in the
future
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plan
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,
while
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the east of
house
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the house
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will build farmland. Looking at the main square, the east of
shops
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will build medical
checkup
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checkups
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to serve residents. Afterwards, there are a lot of road constructions
build
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in
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on
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the site of
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the future's
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future's
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future
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plan
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such
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as
in
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apply
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the opposite
of
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apply
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shops
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and
in
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apply
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the roundabout to the house across the river.
Moreover
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, the
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plan
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planned
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future
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also
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build
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builds
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bridge
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a bridge
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to reach the resident's
home
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homes
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, such, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words future, plan, shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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