The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the growth of industrial
area's
now and planned in the Correct your spelling
areas
future
of the site. Overall
, there are many facilities increase
in the site of Wrong verb form
increased
plan
Wrong verb form
planned
future
development such
as playground
, medical Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
checkup
, Fix the agreement mistake
checkups
school
, and Fix the agreement mistake
schools
shops
. Moreover
, the factory will replace
with residential complexes and the street will be added in the Wrong verb form
be replaced
future
.
To begin
with, the middle of map
in the Norbiton industrial Add an article
the map
area's now have
eight factories. The east of Change the verb form
area now has
factories
will Correct article usage
the factories
be replace
Change the verb form
be replaced
with
Change preposition
by
school
and the southwest of the roundabout changed by Fix the agreement mistake
schools
shops
, while
others
factories will change to Correct quantifier usage
other
be
housing in the Unnecessary verb
apply
future
. The farmland will change with house
in the Add an article
a house
the house
future
plan
, while
the east of house
will build farmland.
Looking at the main square, the east of Correct article usage
the house
shops
will build medical checkup
to serve residents. Afterwards, there are a lot of road constructions Fix the agreement mistake
checkups
build
Wrong verb form
built
in
the site of Change preposition
on
Correct article usage
the future's
future's
Change noun form
future
plan
such
as in
the opposite Change preposition
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
shops
and in
the roundabout to the house across the river. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the plan
Change the verb form
planned
future
also
build
Change the verb form
builds
bridge
to reach the resident's Add an article
a bridge
the bridge
home
.Fix the agreement mistake
homes
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, such, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words future, plan, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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