Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions? Provide examples and explanations.
Nowadays, people are most likely
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the internet
internet
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Internet
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is supported by the rapid development of technology that Change the determiner
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These phenomena
massively
applied in every aspect of life including for education purposes. Online education is one of the most renowned Add a missing verb
is massively
way
to get new knowledge. Change to a plural noun
ways
However
, a new invention is not always acceptable. There are a lot of things we have to consider towards online education.
When we talk about online class
, the opposite method of learning will pop out in our mind, in-class instruction. If we compare Fix the agreement mistake
classes
these two method
, there are several advantages and disadvantages that Change the determiner
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these two methods
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Some
of the advantages of online learning compared to in-class learning is indeed its flexibility in choosing Correct determiner usage
One
time
and schedule to study. Since everything is based on Correct article usage
the time
internet
, it is Add an article
the internet
also
very accessible to get a
real-time updates from all over the world. As long as we are connected to the internet, everything is in our Correct the article-noun agreement
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hand
.
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Nevertheless
, being an online student will not ever replaced
what we get as an offline student. To be fair, as a social human being, it is essential to have a relationship with other people daily. Despite its ability to have a connection through online Change the verb form
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be replaced
platform
, online Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
course
only provide a limited way to get attached Fix the agreement mistake
courses
such
as via chat, comment and video conference. Student
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Students
spent
their whole time in front of their device rather than going out and Wrong verb form
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activity
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activities
together with
fellow mates in offline classes.
To sum up
, online platform
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platforms
has
provided many opportunities to learn anywhere and anytime we want. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
However
, it is also
important to have a
socialization in person as on-site Remove the article
apply
class
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classes
provided
. One way Add a missing verb
are provided
out
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this
problem is just create
a balance between attending online Change the verb form
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course
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courses
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Provide more specific examples to support your arguments. For instance, you could mention particular online platforms and their features or specific experiences of individuals benefiting from online education.
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