The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006.

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the percentage of energy expenditure in

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the UK

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and USA between 2000 and 2006. Generally, there are five different energy that

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been calculated including oil, coal, gas, nuclear

power

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and other renewable sources. The information displays the

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fluctuating

data where each of USA and

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higher in percentage in some of those five aspects.

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The UK

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has led the usage of gas, nuclear

power

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and other renewable sources both in 2000 and 2006.

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's highest data was gas with 38% of utilization.

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the lowest one is the nuclear

power

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with only 10%. Other than that,

USA

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the USA

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has led the consumption of oil and coal

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every year with the highest percentage of 40%. Meanwhile, the least

power

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usage was the

the

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other renewable sources of 5% in 2006.

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The charts below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006.

Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g.:goods, service, news,...) Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract more local people to these museums?

You are taking a course at a local college. The deadline for your project was last week but you haven’t finished it. Write a letter to your lecturer. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain why you haven’t handed in the project yet • request more time to do it.

With the advances in the field of technology, an increasing number of people are now working from home. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working remotely.