You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your tree time while you are in Australia

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Dear
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I am writing
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letter in response to an advertisement published
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week
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in
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one of the leading
Australia
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Australian
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family
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where you asked for a
short term
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like in caregiver for your six-year-old child .I have the right experience to take on
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job
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. Take the best
care
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of your
children
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and I really want to take
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job
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I am confident that
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can serve your child well because I have experience raising several younger siblings. My sister has two small
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, a
6 year old
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6-year-old
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boy busy with work so she entrusts them to me
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care
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of and I feel very happy to be able to take
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my two grandchildren, they are very cute and especially, I often look for information online to take
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of my baby in the best way. Raising a child is not easy so I always find out carefully what to do when the baby cries or when the baby is hungry ,
children
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are meant to be handled gently , so be patient
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them i am a person who loves
children
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very much they are very innocent By the way , recently I came from Viet Nam to visit Australia at the invitation of
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parents to live with them for about the next 6
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months
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. When I’m in Australia I want to explore
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beautiful and livable country , I want to learn about the lifestyle and culture of the
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here ,
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taking
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of your
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if you offer me a
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. I really want to get
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job
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, please give me a chance I will not
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you in me Sincerely Mrs .Nhi
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Greeting and Closing
Ensure proper use of salutations and closures in your letter. For a formal letter, consider using 'Dear Sir/Madam' and ending with 'Yours faithfully,' followed by your full name.
Logical Structure
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs with distinct purposes: introduction, reason for writing, explaining suitability, and future plans in Australia. This enhances readability and coherence.
Suitable Writing Tone
Use a more formal tone throughout the letter by avoiding conversational phrases and ensuring correct grammar and punctuation. Formal letters require a level of professionalism in language.
Complete Response
Address all parts of the task by ensuring each requested point (why you want the job, suitability, and plans in Australia) is fully expanded upon with specific examples and clear explanations.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Maintain a clear focus on each paragraph's main idea. Start each paragraph with a topic sentence and develop that idea fully before moving onto the next paragraph.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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