The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The given bar chart provides information about how families prefer to spend their
each week
salary in a certain country, in the years 1968 and 2018.
Replace the word
weekly
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that, in 1968, the highest amount of money is
spent on food, Wrong verb form
was
while
leisure is
more demanded by people in 2018.
Looking at the details, whether, food accounted for most of the expenditures of Wrong verb form
was
housholds
at around 35% of weekly income, its demands saw a downward trend and stayed at 17% in 2018. Correct your spelling
households
Also
, leisure which had allocated just under 10% of spending to itself, rose to approximately 27%, and became the most families' target of
Change preposition
for
expending
, in 2018.
Correct your spelling
spending
In addition
, the amount of money went
on fuel and power, clothing and Correct pronoun usage
that went
footware
, and personal goods witnessed a falling Correct your spelling
footwear
rend
, Correct your spelling
trend
while
housing and transport experienced a rising trend. Albeit, individuals spent the same money on houshold
goods in both years.Correct your spelling
household
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