you recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback to this course. write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. describe what you enjoyed about the course. say how much cooking you've done since the course. suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.
Dear
sir
or Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
My name is Capitalize word
Madam
parth
patel and In Change the capitalization
Parth
this
letter
I will InformAdd a comma
letter,
to
you that I recently joined Change preposition
apply
cooking
course Add an article
the cooking
a cooking
in
your school. I love cooking in my house and other Change preposition
at
location
. Fix the agreement mistake
locations
Also
I have heard the Add a comma
Also,
nme
of your school a lot. That's Correct your spelling
name
way
I joined your class.
I am very excited Correct your spelling
why
for
Change preposition
about
this
course. And also
I love cookery in other personand
my relative. I'm in 12th stander and I watch the cooking course Correct your spelling
person and
in
my T.V Change preposition
on
sitcomes
. And I felt like cooking after watching that show. Because I Correct your spelling
sitcoms
lives
alone in Change the verb form
live
other
city and I make my Meal For my self.
Correct quantifier usage
another
This
classes
is very Change the determiner
class
helpfull
for me and I have to much Correct your spelling
helpful
cooking
make Correct article usage
the cooking
my self
I have Correct your spelling
myself
make
different food Fix the infinitive
to make
in
every Change preposition
apply
days
. And I have Change to a singular noun
day
make
Change the verb form
made
to
many Correct your spelling
too
disshes
in some Correct your spelling
dishes
neighbour
and my Fix the agreement mistake
neighbours
friendas
.
Correct your spelling
friends
friend
Also
I need your Add a comma
Also,
helped
for me to Change the form of the verb
help
joined
Wrong verb form
join
onther
cookery school or it is not Correct your spelling
another
usefull
for me. I need your suggestion for me.
I hope you suggest me and give me Correct your spelling
useful
right
information for me.
Correct article usage
the right
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
Parth Patel.Correct your spelling
Yours
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Logical Structure
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The body should contain separate paragraphs for each of the topics mentioned in the prompt: your enjoyment of the course, the amount of cooking done since the course, and the suggestion for a new course.
Greeting and Closing
Use greetings and closings appropriately. While 'Dear Sir or Madam,' is a suitable greeting, strive for consistency in capitalization and punctuation. In closing, 'Yours faithfully,' is correct, but ensure proper punctuation and capitalization throughout.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Discuss one main idea per paragraph to improve clarity and cohesion. For example, dedicate one paragraph to what you enjoyed about the course, another to how much cooking you have done since, and a third to your course suggestion.
Complete Response
Clearly address all parts of the task. Provide specific examples of what you enjoyed in the course, quantify how much cooking you have done since, and clearly suggest another course you would like the school to offer, explaining why.
Suitable Writing Tone
Maintain a more formal and consistent tone suitable for writing to a course director. Avoid slang, contractions, and overly casual phrases. Express your points clearly and respectfully for a better impression.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.