The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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compares
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billion
dollars
of funds provided to developing countries from five organizations between 2008 and 2011.
Overall
, the vast mojarity
of money was given by Correct your spelling
majority
the
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organization
3 from 2008 to 2009 whilst the
organisation 2 exceeded it in 2010 and kept the leading role in 2011 as well.
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According to
the information shown in the graph,the
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organization
3 donated 1,5 billion
dollars
to developing countries in 2008 and the amount of money was
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insreased
to 1.7 Correct your spelling
increased
billion
dollars
after a year. However
, the donation from the
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organization
2 soared in 2010 which was almost l billion
dollars
more than that in 2009 by 1.5 billion
dollars
in 2009 and 2.4 billion
dollars
in 2010. Their donation reached 2.6 billion
dollars
in 2011. Unlike the rising funds from the
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organization
2, the money from the
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organization
5 kept reducing in the given time which plummeted from 1.2 billion
dollars
to 0.4 billion
dollars
with 3 times
reduction.Correct your spelling
3-times
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, dollars, organization with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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