The line chart below shows the teenage pregnancy rates in selected countries - Australia, Sweden, the United States, and South Africa - from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the teenage pregnancy rates in selected countries - Australia, Sweden, the United States, and South Africa - from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates teen
pregnancy
age from 15 to 19
rates
in first-level nations among the fifteen nations between 1985 and 2019. Units measured in thousands.
Overall
,
it is clear that
America and New Zealand had the highest
rates
of teenage
pregnancy
while
Denmark and Slovenia had the lowest
rates
of
pregnancy
. Norway and Sweden had similar
rates
. The highest teenage
pregnancy
of the United States and New Zealand
were
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was
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around 24000.
Similarly
, Canada and Republic
has
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have
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the same
number
of teen
pregnancies
, which accounts for 1000 girls.
Likewise
, Iceland, Norway, and Sweden have the same
number
of teenage
pregnancies
, at 6000 girls. Solvak Republic's teen
pregnancy
was 20000
while
Hingery had 18000. Denmark and Slovenia had the lowest
number
of teen
pregnancies
among other developed nations, at 4000 girls respectively.
Furthermore
, Australia has the
number
if
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of
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teenage
pregnancies
, which accounts for 14000. Teen
pregnancy
of
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in
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Belgium had just 8000 and 7000
of
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apply
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teenage
pregnancies
in Finland.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pregnancy, rates, number, pregnancies with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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