The line chart below shows the teenage pregnancy rates in selected countries - Australia, Sweden, the United States, and South Africa - from 1985 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates teen
pregnancy
age from 15 to 19 rates
in first-level nations among the fifteen nations between 1985 and 2019. Units measured in thousands.
Overall
, it is clear that
America and New Zealand had the highest rates
of teenage pregnancy
while
Denmark and Slovenia had the lowest rates
of pregnancy
. Norway and Sweden had similar rates
.
The highest teenage pregnancy
of the United States and New Zealand were
around 24000. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Similarly
, Canada and Republic has
the same Change the verb form
have
number
of teen pregnancies
, which accounts for 1000 girls. Likewise
, Iceland, Norway, and Sweden have the same number
of teenage pregnancies
, at 6000 girls. Solvak Republic's teen pregnancy
was 20000 while
Hingery had 18000. Denmark and Slovenia had the lowest number
of teen pregnancies
among other developed nations, at 4000 girls respectively.
Furthermore
, Australia has the number
if
teenage Correct your spelling
of
pregnancies
, which accounts for 14000. Teen pregnancy
of
Belgium had just 8000 and 7000 Change preposition
in
of
teenage Change preposition
apply
pregnancies
in Finland.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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