The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.

The charts show degrees granted in different fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. In the pie charts, there were four majors given in those years: Computer science, Medicine, Business, and Law.
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The three pie charts illustrate the proportion of the degrees granted in four different majors
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as computer science, medicine,
law
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and business in national
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in three different periods 1990, 2000 and 2010. Units measured in percentage. From the
overall
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perspective, computer science
course
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was the majority in the given three periods as compared to the other subjects.
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law
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was the least
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course
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in the same
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period
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. The major of computer science was 30 per
cent
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in 1990,
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it
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increased
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after one decade, which accounts for two-fifths, in 2010,
this
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course
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rose by 5
percentage
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per cent
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. The second most favourite subject of
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the national
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national
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National University
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university
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of
medicine
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. In 1990,
this
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ratio was a quarter, after ten
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years
, it increased by 5% and it was slightly reduced in 2010, which accounts for 25%.
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, business and
law
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courses
were
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decreased after the first period at
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the National
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University
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. In the first period,
business
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the business
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course
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was 30, per
cent
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and it was reduced by 10% in 2000, in 2010, it was slightly decreased,
at
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to
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15
percentage
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.
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,
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law
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the law
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course
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was the least
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of students
in
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at
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National
University
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and it had just 15 per
cent
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in 1990,
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it
was
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decreased slightly, which accounts for 10% and it's again back to reach the same number, which is 15 per
cent
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in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words law, university, course, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • degrees granted
  • majors
  • trends
  • significant increases/decreases
  • stable trends
  • technological advancements
  • job market demand
  • healthcare policies
  • research breakthroughs
  • economic cycles
  • globalization
  • entrepreneurship trends
  • legislation
  • societal issues
  • international policies
  • academic and professional interests
  • implications
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