You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: • give details about the concert • describe how vou won the tickets • explain why you've chosen your friend to go with you
Dear John
I am writing to you later to inform is that I have won two tickets to a
concert
night one of our favorite bands,and I would like for you join
me.
The Fix the infinitive
to join
concert
is set to take place at the famous in the city on 23 May.The band we both love so much will be per their top hits,and I know it is going to be an unforgettable night without amazing music and great vibes.
I actually won these tickets through a
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an
instagram
giveaway that I entered on a whim.Change the capitalization
Instagram
i
never thought Change the capitalization
I
i
would actually win,but luck was on my side Change the capitalization
I
this
time.As soon as I found out,I knew that i
decided to share Change the capitalization
I
this
experience with you because we have always listened
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listened to
this
band
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band's
musics
with heart.
You were Fix the agreement mistake
music
first
person who Add an article
the first
come
to my mind when I thought about who to invite to Wrong verb form
came
this
concert
. I know we will have an amazing time singing along to our favorite
songs and dancing. Your energy, and love for life music make you the perfect Change the spelling
favourite
concert
buddy.
I really hope you will join me at the concert
. It is going to be a
unforgettable night, and Change the article
an
i
can not wait to share Change the capitalization
I
this
special experience with you.
Looking forward to going to
out together!
Your sincere
Akbarshoh QurbonmuratovChange preposition
apply
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear theme and structure. Your letter is well-organized, but some paragraphs could be more focused on a single idea for enhanced clarity.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use more cohesive devices such as linking words or phrases to make the transition between sentences and paragraphs smoother.
Coherence & Cohesion
Consider proofreading your text for typographical errors and incorrect grammar. This will not only make your text more coherent but also enhance the overall readability.
Task Achievement
Your response to the task is complete, covering all required points. To further improve, you could add more details about the concert experience you anticipate sharing with your friend, thereby enhancing engagement.
Task Achievement
The tone of your letter is generally suitable and friendly, perfectly fitting the informal nature of the task. However, maintaining consistent use of informal language and expressions could enhance the natural flow of your letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
