The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows the cyclical life circle of the monarch butterfly.
Overall
, it is possible to note that the insect has huge transformations through its four stages of life.
Starting from the egg stage, adult buttlerflies
lay their eggs on milkweed leaves plant, where they will be for two weeks until being hatched. After the period, the newly hatched larva will become a caterpillar. It Correct your spelling
butterflies
eat
a lot in Change the verb form
eats
this
phase and grows. When it becomes a hmuyge
caterpillar, it attaches itself Correct your spelling
huge
on
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to
milkweed
plant and the larval stage begins. After the attachment, the larva is capsuled by a structure called Add an article
a milkweed
chrysalis
, staying there for 10 days.
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a chrysalis
On
the third stage, pupal, the insect comes up from the structure. At Change preposition
In
this
point, the butterfly is already formed and the migration to the south begins. After six months, it flies to the north as an adult to find a partner and to redo the same cycle after mating and egg laying
.Add a hyphen
egg-laying
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