The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram shows the cyclical life circle of the monarch butterfly.
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, it is possible to note that the insect has huge transformations through its four stages of life. Starting from the egg stage, adult
buttlerflies
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butterflies
lay their eggs on milkweed leaves plant, where they will be for two weeks until being hatched. After the period, the newly hatched larva will become a caterpillar. It
eat
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a lot in
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phase and grows. When it becomes a
hmuyge
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huge
caterpillar, it attaches itself
on
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milkweed
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a milkweed
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plant and the larval stage begins. After the attachment, the larva is capsuled by a structure called
chrysalis
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a chrysalis
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, staying there for 10 days.
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the third stage, pupal, the insect comes up from the structure. At
this
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point, the butterfly is already formed and the migration to the south begins. After six months, it flies to the north as an adult to find a partner and to redo the same cycle after mating and
egg laying
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egg-laying
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  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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