The graph below gives information about computer possession by household in one European country between 1997 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Computer
Add an article
A computer
The computer
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
possessed
by each family is illustrated by a line graph to show how many Add a missing verb
is possessed
computer
are there in each Change to a plural noun
computers
household
in European
in the period of 1997 to 2001.
In the Correct your spelling
Europe
beggining
, Correct your spelling
beginning
household
without Fix the agreement mistake
households
computers
took the highest portion in 1997 with more than 45% Change preposition
of accomodation
accomodation
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accommodations
had
Wrong verb form
having
no
Change preposition
with no
computers
. However
, after that year, the amount of household
possessed Fix the agreement mistake
households
keep
declining until 2011 and reached the lowest data of under 30%.
Wrong verb form
kept
Next,
the two and only one computers
possession are Change noun form
computer's
quiet
the same when these both categories Correct your spelling
quite
were together increase
. At Change the verb form
together increased
first,
Correct article usage
a family
family
with 2 Fix the agreement mistake
families
computers
contained had the
percentage of Correct article usage
a
beneth
15% but Correct your spelling
beneath
this
number
rapidly jump
up after 1997 and Wrong verb form
jumped
become
Wrong verb form
became
trend
until 2011 with a massive total portion (nearly 30%) in that year. Add an article
a trend
On the other hand
, Add an article
the household
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
had
1 Correct pronoun usage
that had
computer
only has
a worse start when there were no houses Wrong verb form
had
possessed
Correct pronoun usage
that possessed
at
Change preposition
apply
the
1 Correct article usage
apply
computer
until 1999, after that peak, this
number
slightly increase
, along the Wrong verb form
increased
timelenghth
and in 2011 Correct your spelling
time length
this
number
reached 7,5% or higher.
According to
the graph, 3 or more computer
possessed in Fix the agreement mistake
computers
European
Correct your spelling
Europe
has
the highest percentage Correct subject-verb agreement
have
along
the time period. It was 45% in 1997Change preposition
over
,
and took the highest place among the households with Remove the comma
apply
computers
applied shown in the graph. After 1997, this
number
is likely to fall down
a little bit Change preposition
apply
then
go up and maintain the impressive percentage again after that.Submitted by ngovhngoc on
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