the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014 

summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The presented line graph illustrates the average alter of three metal’s costs namely,
Cooper
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,
Nickle
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, and
Zinc
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in 2014.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
Nickle
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experienced a dramatic decline in half of the year,
whereas
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it rose in the next 6 months.
In addition
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, the trends for the other two metals:
Cooper
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and
Zinc
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had mild fluctuation patterns throughout the given time. In detail, In February,
Nickle
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and
Cooper
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decreased
2
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by 2
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% and 1% respectively,
while
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Zinc
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rose
2
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by 2
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%.
Moreover
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, all three mentioned metals’ prices declined during the following months and in June,
Nickle
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reached the lowest cost at -3%,
whereas
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the other two metals’ costs changed by around -1 per cent.
Furthermore
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, the price steady remained in July, August, and September,
while
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Cooper
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had the highest price.
Additionally
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, despite suffering a slight fall over the following month, all three mentioned metals witnessed an increase which
Zinc
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changed 2% and
Cooper
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as well as
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Nickle
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experienced a growth
almost
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of almost
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1%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cooper, nickle, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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