Some people think that the Olympic Games are an exciting event and can promote the communication between different countries, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the choice of worldwide athletic

games

is difficult to make. A wide range of factors is involved in

such

decisions.

Although

some people prefer

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international

sport

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events

, others might

favor

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local

sport

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events

.

This

essay will examine both perspectives before presenting a reasoned opinion.On the one hand, global sports competitions present a range of opportunities.

For example

, there are many ways to entertain

the

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people

such

as motivation,

reduce

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stress and

also improve

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mental health.What is more,

Olympic

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games

would be diverse, with

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international relationships including new connections and cultural exchange to choose from.

Furthermore

, by far access to boost tourism in

Olympic

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games

is ensured by competition participants and a wider choice of income opportunities, increasing visitors and creating demand in areas

such

as hotels and restaurants.

Finally

,

Olympic

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games

could

also

be superior as

there

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are good for cultural identity

such

as

break

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down prejudice

from

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athlete

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between

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each

countries

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.

On the other hand

, some people have strong objections to worldwide championships. One of their main arguments is. making life high expenses resulting from gym memberships or spending

times

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to practice increased by

sport

player

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. Most would agree

that

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. social problems

is

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much higher in

Olympic

games

events

.

Olympic

games

events

are increasingly becoming more common

whereas

in local

sport

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.

Lastly

,

Olympic

games

events

can be a very expensive place to live since finding affordable rooms may present a challenge and everyday living expenses are generally higher than those in local

sport

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.

To sum up

,

Olympic

games

events

offer a wider variety of

opportunity

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for work and leisure. That being said. International sports tournaments symbolize the drawbacks of modern life. I believe that worldwide athletic

games

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events

have more benefits than drawbacks.