The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chart
illustrates the average
water
use
in six cities in Australia,
whereas
the pie
chart
compares how
water
consumption was distributed in six different fields in 2014.
Overall
, the highest
water
use
was recorded in Perth,
while
in Canberra was the least.
Besides
, a significant amount of
water
was used in agricultural practices.
However
, mining ranked
last
among all fields.
According to
the bar
chart
, nearly 300
kilolitres
of
water
was used in Perth, standing first among six cities. The figures for the cities of Sydney, Adelaide, and Brisbane were almost the same, ranking between 200 and 250
kilolitres
. There was little difference in the amount of
water
consumption in Canberra and Melbourne, as the former stood
last
at about 140
kilolitres
. of
water
,
while
the figure for the latter was lower by a margin of 10
kilolitres
. Regarding the pie
chart
, agriculture had the highest share with 67%.
In contrast
, the proportion of
water
use
in mining and manufacturing saw the least, with 2% and 4%, respectively. The
use
of
water
in households,
water
supply, sewage and drainage, and electricity and gas supply was almost the same (less than 10%). The remaining 4% was in other industries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, water, use, kilolitres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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