The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph provides information about how many children women had on average in the UK and Kazakhstan between 1920 and 2019,
while
the table displays the data of the typical age of women when they had their
first-born
Correct your spelling
first born
show examples
over a 100-year period.
Overall
, as we can see from the line statistics,
it is clear that
Kazakhstan has higher numbers of children compared to the UK for the entire interval.
Whereas
, based on the table, the United Kingdom's mothers became
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
parent
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
show examples
later than Kazakhstan's.
Submitted by Qia on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: