The chart and table below show the average number of children born to one woman and the average age of women when they had their first child in two countries between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph provides information about how many children women had on average in the UK and Kazakhstan between 1920 and 2019,
while
the table displays the data of the typical age of women when they had their first-born
over a 100-year period. Correct your spelling
first born
Overall
, as we can see from the line statistics, it is clear that
Kazakhstan has higher numbers of children compared to the UK for the entire interval. Whereas
, based on the table, the United Kingdom's mothers became a
Correct article usage
apply
parent
later than Kazakhstan's.Fix the agreement mistake
parents
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