Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some individuals that global businesses should protect the

environment

for the benefit,

while

others claim to focus on their world business would be better.

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, what I personally think is that they pay attention

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for some reasons that I will elaborate on

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essay. On the one hand, proponents of

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view insist that the

environment

is one of the most essential issues and we should protect it. The number of fires

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increasing day by day at an alarming rate

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the forests.

Therefore

, if companies

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interest

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environment

,

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is paid attention

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buyers. Companies’ products have the opportunity to sell

due to

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factor

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to develop enterprises. In

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,

this

situation will gain the majority of money for

firms

.

On the other hand

,

firms

should watch their

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for improvements. To be more specific, enterprises should promote their goods

instead

of to

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the

environment

.

For instance

, money can be allocated for promoting

merchandises

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and

this

will provide popularity. Another point worth noting is that

firms

have the ability to route money for their

workforces’

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health.

For instance

, they can yield

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sport

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facilities for employees and

this

could better both corporations and staff.

To sum up

,

although

those who support the notable profit is to protect the

environment

for enterprises, whilst it is assisted by others that

firms

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are more important.

However

, I advocate the view that working with companies

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would be better.