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You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas you would like some information about their course .Ask about the school .Say what kind of accommodating you want . Mention any special requests you have

#study #english #school #information #course #requests
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you to explain the letter that I am planning to go and study
english
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English
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 at a
school
 overseas you would like some information about their course. I am your
school
 studying so you me here ground with ask introduce,Tere ground state all up to scratch places, I'm either here course be about to do lesson
school
 all programme the
self time
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self-time
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 nowadays much parent's children specialist
school
 studying so your nowadays all ask very good I'm here reading for go out your whole place with me
ask
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ask to
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 introduce. Here everything enough that around apartment want to be there how
who
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whom
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 humans are leaving outside chance five
soul
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souls
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 another your ask whole environment with introduce I'm so here go should nowadays whole have a state.
Me
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I
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 here ground friends with to occupy want to inasmuch only we are Three humans living so I want to rub a room for three people should be whole the conditions there.
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Task Achievement
Ensure clarity and relevance in addressing the specific queries posed in the task. Avoid being vague or straying from the topic.
Coherence & Cohesion
Organize your writing more effectively by introducing distinct paragraphs for the school inquiry, accommodation preference, and special requests.
Task Achievement
Develop your points fully with specific details or examples to enrich your response and make your requests more impactful.
Coherence & Cohesion
Review and utilize cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, linking words) to better connect your ideas and paragraphs.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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