You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter: • Say that you liked their photos of your family • Ask them to be your photographer at a special family event • Give them the details of the event.

Dear John The reason why

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am writing

this

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letter is that

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am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the amazing

photos

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you took of my family during our recent photo session.Your talent and you

were taken

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photos

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every

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of every

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special

moments

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, and we are absolutely thrilled with the results.My family

very

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satisfied

your

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with your

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hard work and they want

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apply

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you to be our special photographer at

family

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a family

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event

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. After seeing the incredible work you did

wit

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with

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our family

photos

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,I would like to invitation for you to be our photographer at a special upcoming family

event

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.We will

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my grandfather’s 60th birthday anniversary on 29 February at Humo wedding hall. It will be a moment

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will

be full of love,laughter,and cherished memories, and we believe you can take

photos

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of all unforgettable moments. The

event

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will start around 19:00 pm with

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sit down

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dinner,speeches,

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and dancing

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also

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. We are expecting around 200 guests to attend, and we would like group

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and individual portraits. If you are available on 29 February and interested in being our photographer again,

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apply

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we will

would

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be thrilled to have you. Thank you once again for your wonderful work with my family

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, we

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hope you join us

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special

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this special

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event

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. Warm regards Akbarshoh

omondavlat91Sun Mar 03 2024

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task achievement

Ensure the introduction is clear and directly addresses the purpose of the letter. You've done a good job expressing gratitude, but the opening could be more specific about the reason for writing, linking directly to the request.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. While your tone is generally suitable, consider polishing it to ensure it's uniformly polite and professional, especially in the paragraphs detailing the event.

coherence cohesion

Organize the letter logically with clear paragraphs for each main idea. Your letter is generally well-structured, but reviewing the transition between expressing gratitude and making a new request could make the flow even smoother.

coherence cohesion

Use a variety of cohesive devices (e.g., linking words, pronouns) effectively to enhance the flow of the letter. You have used some, but increasing their variety and accuracy can improve the letter's cohesion.

coherence cohesion

Review the letter for minor grammatical errors and typos to enhance clarity and professionalism. This includes correct date formats, punctuation, and verb agreements.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

210 words

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