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Colour is a powerful tool that is used to great effect by manufactures and retail companies when they try to sell us something. In fact, many of the purchasing decisions we make are partly or largely influenced by colour. How true is this statement? How much does colour influence us when we buy something?

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I think
this
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 statement is true,
colour
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 is a very powerful tool to sell us something.
Colour
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 plays a huge role in perception and influences human
behavior
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 and decision-making.
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example
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 a lot of big brands have their "own"
color
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colour
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that is
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 associated with them.
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, there are
thing
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things
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 and places that we associate just with
colour
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.
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, taxis are yellow, airport is associated with blue,
mcdonald`s
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McDonald's
 with red and yellow and much more. The most
favorite
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favourite
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color
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colour
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 combinations in advertising are white and red, white and green, white and blue, white and black,
white
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and white
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 and orange.
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Also
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 every
colour
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 can bring
its
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apply
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different emotions.
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 red brings aggression. It is suitable for stimulating physical activity as it increases the heart rate. People become more excited and energetic. But
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 it associates with love, power,
strength
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and strength
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. People become more excited and energetic. Among the brands that have chosen
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 bright
color
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colour
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 for their logos are the well-known Coca-Cola, Canon, Levis, H&M and others. Yellow is
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colour
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the colour
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 of
sun
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, excitement, fun and warmness. Green emphasizes the naturalness and environmental friendliness of products, closeness to nature, and commitment to caring for the environment. Often used in the fields of medicine and cosmetology. The classic combination of white and black is stylish, elegant,
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and laconic
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laconic
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. It is often used by expensive brands. Blue is associated with the following feelings: trust, loyalty, logic,
security
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and security
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. But it is very important to choose colours for
brand
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the brand
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 in
a
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the
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 correct way. It is very easy to select
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colour
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coherence cohesion
The essay effectively discusses the impact of color in marketing and consumer behavior, providing examples and explaining how different colors evoke different emotions. However, it would benefit from a clearer structure, including a distinct introduction, supporting paragraphs, and a conclusion that summarizes the main points and reflects on the initial question.
task achievement
To enhance task achievement, the essay should address the question more directly by explicitly stating to what extent the author agrees with the statement in the prompt. Additionally, it could be improved by providing a more balanced view or considering counterarguments to make the discussion more comprehensive.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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