Some people believe that anyone can create art, such as painting, poetry, music, etc. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, art
is
Verb problem
has
becoming
more popular among young Wrong verb form
become
people
. Some think that anyone can be artistic, whilst others feel that not everyone has the abilities in art. In my opinion, I believe that a person must have natural Use synonyms
talent
so as to be artistic. Use synonyms
This
is because Linking Words
talent
is a natural ability that cannot be acquired.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, some Linking Words
people
have the opinion that being excellent in arts can be possessed by anyone. They believe Use synonyms
this
because anyone can learn art and be good at it. Linking Words
For example
, a child who learns how to play Linking Words
piano
would be competent at it after several years. Change the article
the piano
As a result
, the more he trains, the better he will be at piano playing.
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Secondly
, another group of Linking Words
people
think that not everyone can be artistic. They claim that being artistic is a natural Use synonyms
talent
that cannot be learned. Use synonyms
For instance
, a famous American singer Micheal Jackson was a talented dancer and singer. He started Linking Words
sing
when he was a child and did not go to any singing academy. Change the form of the verb
singing
However
, he became famous Linking Words
since
he was young, singing with his brothers in a group called ‘The Jacksons’.
Personally, I believe to excel in arts, one must have the natural Correct word choice
when
talent
to be artistic. If he does not have the Use synonyms
talent
, he Use synonyms
would
not be able to improve in it. Even if he goes to an academy to study arts. Take Wrong verb form
will
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for
example, a famous actor in my country Add the comma(s)
, for
claims
that he never Correct pronoun usage
who claims
attends
any acting schools in his entire life. Wrong verb form
attended
However
, his acting is outstanding and natural. Linking Words
Thus
, he totally relies on his natural ability Linking Words
in acting
.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that to be an excellent artist, a person must have Change preposition
to act
the
Correct article usage
apply
talent
. Use synonyms
However
, some Linking Words
people
believe Use synonyms
this
could be learned. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, I feel to be Linking Words
an
superb Change the article
a
artistic
, one must be born with Replace the word
artist
the
talents.Correct article usage
apply
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