Some people believe that anyone can create art, such as painting, poetry, music, etc. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, art
is
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has
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becoming
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more popular among young
people
. Some think that anyone can be artistic, whilst others feel that not everyone has the abilities in art. In my opinion, I believe that a person must have natural
talent
so as to be artistic.
This
is because
talent
is a natural ability that cannot be acquired.
Firstly
, some
people
have the opinion that being excellent in arts can be possessed by anyone. They believe
this
because anyone can learn art and be good at it.
For example
, a child who learns how to play
piano
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the piano
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would be competent at it after several years.
As a result
, the more he trains, the better he will be at piano playing.
Secondly
, another group of
people
think that not everyone can be artistic. They claim that being artistic is a natural
talent
that cannot be learned.
For instance
, a famous American singer Micheal Jackson was a talented dancer and singer. He started
sing
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when he was a child and did not go to any singing academy.
However
, he became famous
since
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he was young, singing with his brothers in a group called ‘The Jacksons’. Personally, I believe to excel in arts, one must have the natural
talent
to be artistic. If he does not have the
talent
, he
would
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not be able to improve in it. Even if he goes to an academy to study arts. Take
for
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example, a famous actor in my country
claims
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that he never
attends
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attended
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any acting schools in his entire life.
However
, his acting is outstanding and natural.
Thus
, he totally relies on his natural ability
in acting
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to act
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. In conclusion, there is no doubt that to be an excellent artist, a person must have
the
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talent
.
However
, some
people
believe
this
could be learned.
Nevertheless
, I feel to be
an
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superb
artistic
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artist
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, one must be born with
the
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apply
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talents.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal form of expression
  • inherent aspect
  • specialized skills
  • innate talent
  • specialized training
  • evokes deep emotions
  • resonates
  • folk art
  • street art
  • digital media
  • traditional institutions
  • formal education
  • groundbreaking contributions
  • rigorous training
  • profound art
  • inclusive activity
  • meaningful work
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