The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the working
hours
for the Fire Use synonyms
service
, Use synonyms
Police
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service
, Nurses, and Teachers per Use synonyms
week
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the table shows the information on the annual salary for 4 different occupations.
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Overall
, nurses spend a lot of Linking Words
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Police
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.
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, Nurses use approximately 55 Use synonyms
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, the fire Linking Words
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spent close to 40 Use synonyms
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working which is 4 Use synonyms
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time
spent than the Use synonyms
police
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service
only 35 Use synonyms
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per Use synonyms
week
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Then
, the lowest Linking Words
time
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week
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In addition
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police
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service
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service
get annual salaries close to 50,000 Use synonyms
pounds
, which are 52,050 Use synonyms
pounds
and 48,700 Use synonyms
pounds
,respectively. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Nurse's and Teachers' salaries are only under 40,000 Linking Words
pounds
, which are 37,450 Use synonyms
pounds
and 33,600 Use synonyms
pounds
, respectively.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, service, police, week, time, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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