The chart and table show working hour and salary for 4 different occupationa. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the working
hours
for the Fire service
, Police
service
, Nurses, and Teachers per week
. Moreover
, the table shows the information on the annual salary for 4 different occupations.
Overall
, nurses spend a lot of time
working per week
rather than in other occupations but the highest salary among the four jobs is Police
Service
.
Regarding hours
worked per week
, Nurses use approximately 55 hours
per week
which is a higher time
than other jobs. Furthermore
, the fire service
spent close to 40 hours
per week
working which is 4 hours
more time
spent than the police
service
only 35 hours
per week
. Then
, the lowest time
for working is for teachers close to 30 hours
per week
.
In addition
, police
service
and fire service
get annual salaries close to 50,000 pounds
, which are 52,050 pounds
and 48,700 pounds
,respectively. On the other hand
, the Nurse's and Teachers' salaries are only under 40,000 pounds
, which are 37,450 pounds
and 33,600 pounds
, respectively.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, service, police, week, time, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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