It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

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punishing is very important for young ones to differentiate good and bad at an early childhood.In my conviction, penalties create strong memories to distinguish correct from wrong .

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nursery time to get the maximum enjoyable time.

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society. In conclusion, penalties can

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memories to guide a young

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should be crafted

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young minds.As

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to teach them the difference

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good and bad at an early age.