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Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night.Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that someting be done about the dog.Include in your letter: •Your reason for writing •What you would like to happen •A nice,respectful sytle.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing in order to complain about your
dog
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 that barks throughout the day and the night and ruins my day. My first problem
is
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 when
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 came home from school.I just wanna take a nap for a little
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 but your small
dog
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 distrub my peace.
Furthmore
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Furthermore
 in the evenings
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 can't concentrate on my studies.My exam is coming soon so
i
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 have to put a lot of effort
on
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 it.Even at
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night
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i
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 can't sleep because of your
dog
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. I suggest that you have to keep your
dog
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 away from your house or somewhere else.I know,you adore your
dog
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 so much
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 is the best way to resolve the problem.I would appreciate it
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 if you would look into
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 matter as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you.Thank you for taking the time to consider my concerns. Yours faithfully, Sevinch
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Logical Structure
Ensure your letter has a clear introduction, body paragraphs with individual ideas, and a conclusion. Have a separate paragraph for the reason you are writing, what you would like to happen, and a polite request or closing statement.
Greeting and Closing
Start your letter with a proper greeting to the neighbor, such as 'Dear [Neighbor's Name]' if you know it, and close with a more personalized sign-off to maintain a friendly and respectful tone throughout the letter.
Single Idea Per Paragraph
Discuss one main idea per paragraph to maintain clarity and organization. For instance, dedicate one paragraph to explaining the disturbance, another to its impact on you, and a third to suggesting solutions, keeping the structure reader-friendly.
Complete Response
Ensure that your response addresses all parts of the task clearly and directly. While you have mentioned the issue and a solution, consider expressing your points more politely to maintain a respectful tone. Additionally, offering more constructive solutions or a willingness to discuss the issue further can enhance task completion.
Suitable Writing Tone
Use a consistent and suitable writing tone throughout your letter. While your intention is to be respectful, the demand to 'keep your dog away from your house' could come across as harsh. Suggest meeting to discuss possible solutions or express understanding for the neighbor's situation to maintain a positive tone.
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