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IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.
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The given line graph demonstrates the
visitor's
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 ratio of attractive
placec
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places
place
 including
Art
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the Art
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 Gallery, Pavilion, Pier and Festival of Brighton in England between the years 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, the most tourists in
total
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the total
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 amount of
visitis
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visits
visitors
 in
entirly
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entirely
entire
 span of study went to the Pavilion,
whereas
 the least
visitis
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visits
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were
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was
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were
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 taken from Pier. Festival was hosting
the
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 constant number of
peoples
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people
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 during the studied time, and Art
gallary
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gallery
 experienced to
oposite
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opposite
shoks
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shocks
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 in visit rate at the
beginig
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beginning
 of the study. Pavillion saw a sharp rise after 1985 and reached
the
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 peak at about 45% in 1995,
then
 it
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continued dropping marginally towards just above 30% after a sharp decline in 2000.
Festival
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The festival
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 visiting rate remained constant from 1985 after a slight
decreas
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decrease
 from 30 to around 25
percent
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. Pier visitors portion had been fluctuating around 10 % over the 19th decade
,
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 and slightly grew up to just above 20% from 2000 to 2010. And the
last
 attraction, Art Gallery, after experiencing a peak at 35 % in 1985
drroped
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drooped
drop
 down suddenly to 20 % in 1990 and after a short period
constant
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 visiting at
this
 level, it fell to under 10%
at the end
 of
period
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the period
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