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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what way has technology affected the types of relationship people make. Is this a positive or negative development.

#people #technology #relationship #development
Communication is the key tool for the human
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existence
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 the mode of communication, especially in today's
technology focused
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 world.
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both sides of
technology
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 impacts on the types of
relationship
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relationships
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. On the one hand, people who believe in
technology
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positive developments in
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relationship
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due to
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advanced communication
technology
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new friends or life partners from thousands of miles apart.
Further
,
Technology
 makes life easy to interact with anyone at
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 without any restriction, which helps to boost the relationship in personal life
as well as
 the professional side
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On the other hand
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the
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people argue that
technology
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disturb
disturbs
 the traditional interaction between
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human beings and it got worse when they introduced
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 different
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 of social apps for interaction which
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eliminates
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true emotions and feelings.
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technology
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human thinking power. In conclusion,
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Ensure your essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The conclusion was not completed in your essay, which is essential for summarizing your argument and presenting your viewpoint.
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Develop your main points with specific examples and explanations. While you mentioned technology's impact on relationships, elaborating on these ideas with specific, detailed examples will strengthen your argument.
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Aim for a balanced argument by equally discussing the positive and negative effects of technology on relationships, but also make sure to clearly state your opinion on whether it is overall positive or negative.
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