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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate an island before and after its modification of infrastructure for foreign travellers.
Overall
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, the islet has totally changed into overseas travel facilities with residential areas , a restaurant and connecting
access
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 roads .
However
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, the
right
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 corner of the cay remains unchanged, and they have not removed any trees with the new facilities. In detail, they have developed a
pire
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picture
 to
access
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 the isle via boats. From the
pier
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pier,
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 a vehicle track has been constructed to go around the central reception
area
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 and to
access
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 the restaurant which is situated on the opposite corner of the pier. Other than that, two housing areas have been introduced left and
right
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 sides of the lobby, and the lodgings left to the lobby
area
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 have been connected to the vehicle track.
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, around the previous beach, a swimming
area
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 has been created.
Whereas
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 , rooms
right
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 to the reception
area
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are
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 not in
access
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 to the vehicle tract and it's open to the untouched
area
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 on the
right
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 side of the island.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words access, right, area with synonyms.
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