Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product such as cell phones and service like medical treatment. Do you agree or disagree?

In

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conventional era, money plays a crucial role

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the

liesures

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leisures

leisure

. It is believed by some

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of thought that materialistic things and medical services are chosen by people on the basis of their

finance

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capability. I

donot

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do not

don't

buy

this

notion completely and

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essay will highlight the backing reasons in support of my persuasion in the subsequent paragraphs. Diverse points endorse the compelling reasons for the

aformentioned

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phenomenon. The principal among all is that

individual

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can spend hefty amounts to

fulfill

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their desires. Since

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international brands have gained popularity worldwide, youngsters

donot

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do not

hesitate to spend

large

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amount

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on them.

For instance

, Christian Dior is

immensly

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immensely

popular in today's generation, its one bag has

whopping

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amount of nearly $2000.

Apart from

this

, adults

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lakhs every year on Apple

iphones

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iPhones

to buy the latest model of it.

However

, they exchange their previous phone with the new one by

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loss which

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do not

matters

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to them much.

Therefore

, folks not only spend money on expensive handbags

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but

also

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keen

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interest in the new launches of Apple. To consolidate my viewpoint, it can be inferred that

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individuals

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love to buy luxury cars

inspite

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in spite

of the fact that it is very heavy on their pockets. Even if the elite brands of cars like Rolls Royce, BMW, Audi and Telstra have exorbitant costs, these are the favourites of multitudes.

Thus

, the more the luxury a brand provides, the lesser are chances

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for the customers to avoid it.

Besides

this

, in terms of medical treatment, no one wants to compromise

with

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the

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health, so pupils go beyond the limits to cure the underlying issues of their family

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.

For example

, medical treatment in Western countries demands big-budget,

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is seen that parents of international students after reaching

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these countries,

some times

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suffer major health concerns,

consequently

, students send their parents for treatment without thinking about the expenses.

To conclude

, it can be inferred that no doubt, few humans consider spending money wisely on items and services. Well, I personally believe that individuals can buy anything of their dreams without considering the costs of the material. Youth loves to own branded bags, luxurious cars,

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highly priced

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iphones

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iPhones

phones

and

also

can afford

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expensive treatments.