The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions

The graphs below provide information on global population figures and figures for urban populations in different world regions
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The first
graph
illustrates the data about the rate of the world's
population
(in millions) between 1800 and 2100, and the second
graph
depicts the
growth
of the urban
population
for the next 25 years.
Overall
, what stands out from the first
graph
is that the global
population
is expected to experience a dramatic rise, before a major decline.
According to
the second
graph
, the enlargement in the
population
of developed regions is predicted to face a gradual rise,
while
the
figure
for developing countries won’t change over the given period. In terms of world
population
growth
, its
figure
has seen a continuous increase since 1800. From 1800 to 1920, the number rose slowly from 1
billion
to just under 2
billion
.
However
, the
figure
then
soared, and currently is around 7.5
billion
. The
graph
also
shows the future trend for the global
population
. The number is looking forward to peaking at just above 8
billion
in 2040 and 2050.
Next,
the
figure
will gradually drop by roughly 2
billion
in the
last
2 decades. The predictions
then
illustrate the
growth
in the urban area’s
population
.
While
, developed countries are planning to see
a
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steady
growth
from just above 2
billion
to 4
billion
in 25 years, developing countries' figures will remain stable at approximately 1.3
billion
.
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