You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
graph illustrates the plan to construct a new shopping mall including two sites for the city
of Brandfield. Overall
, S1 will be located in the west of the river, while
S2 will be built in the southeast corner of this
area. Moreover
, both of them are close to two main transport facilities, Road and Railway.
Firstly
, the City
planner will make S1 surrounded by a river, a road, and a railway. Subsequently
, S1 is going to be to the north of the city
centre and constructed to the southeast of the housing estate. Moreover
, there are the golf centre and park which acquire the most wild lands of Brandfield in the west of the city
.
On the other hand
, S2 will be placed to the southeast of the city
centre. Notably, this
location is near the Industrial estate along with
the side path and the railway. In addition
, the area in the south of this
city
has not been planned to develop in recent years.Submitted by J.C.Li.1997.11 on
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