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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exaxples from your own knowledge or experience

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Many
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experienceMany
Correct your spelling
experience
students
 choose to take a
gap
year
 before starting
university
, to
travel
 or
gain
work
experience
. Do you think is a good
idea
 or a
waste
 of
time
? Give
reasons
 for your
answer
 and include any relevant
Correct your spelling
examples
exaxples
Correct your spelling
examples
 from your own
knowledge
 or
experience
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