Some people say that no one should do this beneficia forever, while omers believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual, company and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed by some that
people
should change
jobs
often, whereas
others argue that it is beneficial for people
to stick to one
job
for life, grab a pension and retire. This
essay intends to discuss both perspectives. While
believe that frequent job
-hopping is not good, a job
change
, once or twice in one
's whole career span is acceptable.
On the one
hand, those who favour changing jobs
every few years, give their reasons as follows. Firstly
, changing jobs
can help a person to develop new skills and get different types of experience. For example
, when people
change
jobs
, they are pushed out of their comfort zone and they are pushed to learn new routines. Secondly
, it keeps things interesting and prevents work from becoming boring and monotonous. It is also
an opportunity to figure out which type of employers
and company culture suit
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suits
people
the best.
On the other hand
, there are many reasons why some people
support sticking to a single job
forever. The main reason is that it increases job
security in today's time,
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job
uncertainty is at an all-time high. Employers
are not only more likely to retain workers who have been working longer but they are also
hesitant to hire people
, who have a history of changing jobs
frequently.
Sticking to one
job
also
helps in better work-life balance. In other words
, with time people
become more comfortable with their work responsibilities and thus
they are able to devote more time to their personal life.
While
I believe changing jobs
once or twice in a career span is certainly beneficial, I also
believe that frequent job
hopping can be detrimental. Apart from the benefits mentioned above, the varied experience from working in different positions and companies makes people
more adaptable and flexible. It also
makes them more valuable to employers
and thus
they earn higher paychecks. However
, if people
change
their jobs
too often, employers
start questioning their loyalty. So, people
should avoid changing jobs
too frequently.
To sum up
, an occasional job
change
is understandable, but hopping from one
job
to the other every year or two,
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employers
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