The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the natural process in which

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greenhouse

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the greenhouse

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effect

take

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takes

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place.

Overall

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, there are several complex phases in the natural cycle, starting with the sun heating the ground,

as well as

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the contribution of human activities, which results in the heat into the atmosphere , and culminating with energy

gets

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getting

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trapped by the

greenhouse

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gases. The most logical point to start at is the industrial activities taken by

human

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humans

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. The majority of transportation

together with

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industrial factories are one of the main sources that release a significant amount of carbon dioxide through burning fossil fuels, which

then

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add up to extra

greenhouse

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gases in the air.

Simutaneously

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Simultaneously

, the process

is fasten

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is fastened

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by the act of deforestation, cutting down loads of trees which help to absorb carbon dioxide in the air. At the same time, the heat

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that come

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come

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comes

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from the sun reflects off

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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after being hit to the ground by the sun. There, the heat would either radiate into space or get trapped by the

greenhouse

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gases.