The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
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The present line graph illustrates the number of residents living in three different countries, namely Colombia,
Yamhill
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, and
Washington
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.
This
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survey includes the years between 1940 and 2000. In general, throughout the entire period, the population of
Washington
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remained the highest among the others. In 1940, the number of people living in
Washington
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accounted for 75,000. And, in the following 30 years, we saw an upward trend. It reached approximately 125,000. During
this
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period, the other two
also
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rose the same percentage together. The populations of
Yamhill
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and Colombia made up around 30,000 and 20,000 in 1940, respectively, but because of changes, both reached 35,000 and 45,000 in 1970, which is remarkable. Turning to the
last
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30 years, the number of residents of
Washington
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experienced dramatically high growth, from 125,000 to 250,000. Looking at Colombia and
Yamhill
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, their populations
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showed slow growth. The Columbian people justified 75,000,
while
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the residents of
Yamhill
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clarified 90,000 in the
last
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year, 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words yamhill, washington with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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