Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an and unsatisfactory job or shorted of money others argue that is better to try and improve such situation discuss both views and give your own opinion

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the fact that

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keep improving

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their

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as much as they can,

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decide to

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at the same stage of the

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will express my opinion. in terms of the first perspective that "some

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keep staying at the same

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some ladies prefer to have a

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city and

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doesn't matter if the

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descriptions

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or not.

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don't have good educations, so they must

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accept any

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poor family they put their children

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any

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like cleaning, farming and driving.

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that the most majorities of employees that

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know,

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challenging

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with

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each other to get the super situations, and they never ever accept any contract that has

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, and instance of that they are many reasons for

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the human being like to keep improving in whole his life in all of

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many families

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decided to move to

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city for improve their

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and their lifestyle financially. in conclusion

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that i prefer to build my

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modestly and that will motivate me to

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more and more

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my

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and i will not be accepted

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me low

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will try to

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several

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courses to get good positions.