More developing countries are being given aid by international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is who
have
to provide Correct subject-verb agreement
has
poorer
nations. It is undeniable that in one country there are wealthy and poor citizens. Change preposition
for poorer
However
, there is no absolute agreement on whether poor citizens should be provided by wealthy nations or by government
.
A commonly held belief is that Correct article usage
the government
rich
part Correct article usage
the rich
on
Change preposition
of
country
should share their money with Add an article
the country
poor
part. As Add an article
the poor
the
evidence of Correct article usage
apply
this
they point to that every month rich Add a comma
this,
people
should give certain
amount of money to Change the article
a certain
the
indigent families. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, they have to provide them with food and education. It could be explained by the fact that by sharing money all citizens of country
will be Add an article
the country
a country
in
Change preposition
on
equal
level. Correct article usage
an equal
Moreover
, wealth of the state would not have been spent. As a result
, it leads to that society will be without rivalry and bullying.
On the other hand
, some people
claim that responsibility
of providing Correct article usage
the responsibility
poor
population lies Correct article usage
a poor
on
the government. Change preposition
with
For example
, they may mention that, if poor person
take out a loan, governments should pay Fix the agreement mistake
people
off
if they cannot. Correct pronoun usage
it off
In addition
, they should give discount
Fix the agreement mistake
discounts
to
some products in the market. The explanation lies in the fact that Change preposition
on
population
would be Correct article usage
the population
peer
. Fix the agreement mistake
peers
Therefore
, poor nations will be
live without limitations and live as other Unnecessary verb
apply
normally
Change the adverb
normal
people
.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would agree that wealthy people
should share with
their treasure. In my opinion, it is the best solution for Change preposition
apply
this
issue. Therefore
, by giving to charity everyone could live in social equality.Submitted by dnm.best on
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task achievement
Ensure the essay directly addresses the prompt by discussing both sides of the argument regarding aid to developing countries, and clearly state your opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Develop a clear introduction that outlines the essay's purpose and your stance on the topic. Include a conclusion that summarises your discussion and restates your opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your essay with clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point. Use topic sentences at the beginning of paragraphs to guide the reader.
task achievement
Support your main points with relevant examples or reasons. This strengthens your argument and demonstrates understanding of the topic.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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