Which country is the most beautiful in the world and why? Answer the question by expressing your opinion. Write at least three sentences.

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of beauty depends on people, some love nature, some love big cities and more. For me, the most beautiful city is one which has a magnificent nature. That's why in my opinion, the most beautiful city is one of the US's states Alaska. Its nature, mountains,

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are so wonderful. Especially, wild animals, big predators like bears, wolves make here more exciting.

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Task Achievement

Make sure that the introduction clearly states your opinion about the most beautiful country, not just a city or state, and provides a brief outline of the reasons. This will improve clarity and focus.

Task Achievement

Develop your main ideas more comprehensively with specific details or examples that highlight the beauty of the place you are describing. This could include mentioning specific landscapes, natural wonders, or cultural aspects unique to Alaska.

Coherence and Cohesion

Organize your essay more effectively by having clear paragraphs for introduction, each main point, and conclusion. Use transitional phrases to help the reader follow your argument.

Coherence and Cohesion

In your conclusion, restate your opinion more clearly and summarise the key points made in the essay. This helps reinforce your argument and gives the essay a clear ending.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

63 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that hard work and determination are the main requirements for success, while others say other factors lead to success. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give a reason for your example and include relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

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