Which country is the most beautiful in the world and why? Answer the question by expressing your opinion. Write at least three sentences.

Meaning
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The meaning
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of beauty depends on people, some love nature, some love big cities and more. For me, the most beautiful city is one which has a magnificent nature. That's why in my opinion, the most beautiful city is one of the US's states Alaska. Its nature, mountains,
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and flora
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are so wonderful. Especially, wild animals, big predators like bears, wolves make here more exciting.
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Task Achievement
Make sure that the introduction clearly states your opinion about the most beautiful country, not just a city or state, and provides a brief outline of the reasons. This will improve clarity and focus.
Task Achievement
Develop your main ideas more comprehensively with specific details or examples that highlight the beauty of the place you are describing. This could include mentioning specific landscapes, natural wonders, or cultural aspects unique to Alaska.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your essay more effectively by having clear paragraphs for introduction, each main point, and conclusion. Use transitional phrases to help the reader follow your argument.
Coherence and Cohesion
In your conclusion, restate your opinion more clearly and summarise the key points made in the essay. This helps reinforce your argument and gives the essay a clear ending.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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