Some believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some individuals believe that the old generation's
advice
is useful for young
people
. Because they have many
experience
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experiences
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.
Therefore
, I think that it is more valuable to
advice
from both types.
Firstly
, in my point of view, it is important for young
people
to get
advice
from old
people
rather than adults.
Moreover
, many young generations
have
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do have
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not enough
the
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apply
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knowledge and
experience
compared to older. If you get
advice
from older, you will save plenty of time and money.
For instance
, my father always
gaive
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gave
give
me several
advice
which
help
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helped
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me to find some close friends and
job
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a job
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.
Therefore
, I gained
to
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too
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many
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much
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success with these
advices
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advice
pieces of advice
bits of advice
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. Alternatively, if a person is young and inexperienced,
then
advice
may not be extremely valuable.
However
, some young
people
have
many
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apply
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knowledge and
experience
. Their perspective can
also
be
useful
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more useful
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than
perspective
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the perspective
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of some
olders
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holders
older
. Because young individuals know better modern technology than adults. So their
beneficial
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benefits
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is
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are
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in many places
such
as in banks,
business
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businesses
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and other places. Because modern technologies are developing day by day.
Therefore
, young generations create many programs that it is extremely useful for adults and
olds
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old
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.
For instance
, my
17 year-old
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17-year-old
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couisin
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cousin
instilled
mobile
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a mobile
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app
to
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in
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his mother's mobile phone. In conclusion, I think that older
people
have a greater life
experience
,
however
, it is
also
benefitial
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beneficial
to ask
advice
from young individuals because they understand modern technologies better.
Sometime
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Sometimes
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, it is more useful to
listen
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listen to
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advice
of older and younger. Because they have equal
experience
.
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