A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

In the early years of

this

generation,

oil

resources

are the key point of development.

Therefore

, many countries took a mount of money to look for it. It caused the

resource

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resources

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to decrease significantly. Some people think

this

would be a good time to find the new

energy

to be the replacement. I think the opinion has a point.

Firstly

,

oil

is a limited resource. And after it becomes

energy

, pollution it made as another problem for each country.

Oil

is made from

fossil

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fossils

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. It needs to be mine from the earth.

Moreover

, there are limited places where we can discover

oil

. It is a challenge to develop the

oil

resources

or to keep the natural

resources

. Even more

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the process's products could cause some problems for the environment.

For instance

, greenhouse.

Therefore

, developing new sources,

such

as clean

energy

, could solve the problem caused by using

oil

as

resource

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a resource

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.

For example

, solar

energy

is an unlimited amount to Earth. Because the source is out of the earth, it is in outer space which means each person who has the equipment to store the

energy

could use the

resources

. It is not only avoided emitting the

pullution

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pollution

,

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but

also

kindly to nature. In conclusion, I prefer developing new sources of power to replace the original ones. The reason is it is more

kindly

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for

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nature by reducing

the

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pollution

emission

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emissions

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and the new

energy

resources

could be unlimited to use

it

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apply

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.