the diagram shows the stage involved in the process of making leather

the diagram shows the stage involved in the process of making leather
The infographic illustrates a linear process to produce leather goods.
Overall
, the process is quite simple, commencing with animal
skin
being processed and culminating with polished
skin
is ready for distribution to the factory before eventually manufacturing the final leather products. Regarding the first phase, the
skin
taken from wild animals is dried prior to being transferred to the factory. Bext, the
skin
is
then
dipped into the mixture of lime water in order to complete the washing step. As
this
stage is done, it is soaked in lime and is ready to move on final processing stage. Complete the product is the focus on the latter sequence. Once
skin
soaking is finished, it is flattened before being soaked again in tannin, which is a blend of water
as well as
vegetable matter mixed into.
The next step is
polishing and dispatching to the manufacturer when the
skin
is soaked.
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