The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced
the picture
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
process
of manufacturing leather which include
eleven steps
in the first Correct subject-verb agreement
includes
stage
of the process
, animal skin
is dried using a
ventilation before being delivered to the factory using a lorry after reaching Remove the article
apply
stage
, it Correct determiner usage
this stage
then
put into a container for washing an animal Add a missing verb
is then
skin
addition of
water and lime are added Change preposition
apply
while
washing in
the Change preposition
apply
next
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Next
stage
soaking
of animal Add a missing verb
is soaking
skin
is done using a only a lime water in a flat large container
furthermore
, the skin
passed
through the roller machine for flattering before it takes back into Wrong verb form
passes
soaking
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the soaking
a soaking
process
but this
time a new material is added such
as tannin vegetable matter with water afterward
polishing is done on the animal Change the spelling
afterwards
skin
before taken by the lorry in the final stage
of the process
, the lorry delivered animal skin
to the factory before it
been used on Add the auxiliary verb
it has
makingnew
products for customers
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making new
overall
, it is vividly manifested it is linear
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a linear
process
, Correct your spelling
beginning
begining
with Correct your spelling
beginning
drying
of animal Add an article
the drying
a drying
skin
and ending up with making new products for customersSubmitted by abdulahad08600 on
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