The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The pie graphs illustrate the average

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consumption in Australian

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households

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and the percentage of greenhouse gas emissions resulting

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these

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energy

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, the most significant proportion of

energy

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consumption

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water heating and heating which

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together

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for nearly three quarters,

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the

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ratio of using

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is lighting and cooling.

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, water heating and other appliances together

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of

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half of green gas emissions .

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cooling

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energy

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and

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emission

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emissions

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.

Energy

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use by water heating comprises of a third Australian

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households

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.

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, produce roughly

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(32%) of gas

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.

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heating

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42% of

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but it produce

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15%.

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, lighting and refrigeration produce double

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of consumption

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8% and 14 % respectively.

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cooling is the least amount of

energy

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using and

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emission

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which comprises

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2% and 3% respectively