The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints from passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The bar charts below indicate the bus company's performance of actual and
target
punctuality along with
the amount
of dissatisfied passengers within the period of 5 years from 1999 to 2003.
From the Change the quantifier
number
overall
perspective, we can see that percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
target
columns is higher than the actual columns. The highest target
was in 1999 with 86% while
the actual showed only 55%.
The significant difference was the next year
in 2000 with the
4% of dissemblance though the Correct article usage
apply
target
punctuality remained same
Correct article usage
the same
as
86%.
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at
On the other hand
, the only time when actual punctuality was higher than target
one was in 2003 with 0.5
% difference.
As for the number of complaints per thousand passenger's journey, it was increasing gradually Correct article usage
a 0.5
year
by year
. The highest one was in the year
of 2003 with 120 passengers.Submitted by ali_naz on
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