It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Task Achievement
Focus on the prompt's main question about 'travel broadens the mind', but your essay discusses people's trust in words and experiences instead. Ensure your essay directly responds to the given topic.
Coherence & Cohesion
Introduce the topic clearly in the first paragraph, stating your opinion explicitly. Conclude your essay by summarizing your thoughts and restating your stance.
Task Achievement
Develop your points fully with examples specifically related to 'travel and mind broadening'. Avoid discussing unrelated examples or general behavior patterns.
Coherence & Cohesion
Organize your essay with clear paragraphs, each introduced with a topic sentence. Ensure your arguments flow logically, leading the reader through your reasoning.
Task Achievement
Use examples that clearly support your argument. Real-world, personal, or hypothetical examples are effective if directly relevant to the question.