The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

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The bar illustrates the share of 3 different individuals who consumed 5 meals of vegetables and fruits on a daily basis in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
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women by far account for the highest consumption of greenery in a common family, children had the lowest consumption in the depicted time
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, as shown in the chart, all groups experienced a
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of long-term growth from 2001 to 2006, with a subsequent decline from 2006 to the end of
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. By looking at the chart's details, it becomes obvious that around 20% of women and 15% of men opted for eating five portions of these foods in 2005, compared with only 5% of children. During the next 5 years, the figure for a female member of a normal British household steadily rose by
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%, approximately.
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, male consumption remained the same between 2001 and 2003;
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, between 2004 and 2007,
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number witnessed an increase to a high of just below 30%. In the final
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, both males and females were reduced to 25% and 30%, respectively. In terms of children's
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, we can observe a similar pattern, with initial growth reaching 25% in 2007 and a final drop to 23% in 2008.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • portion
  • consumption
  • trend
  • significant increase/decrease
  • stability
  • public health campaign
  • awareness
  • socio-economic factors
  • health implications
  • daily intake
  • nutritional habits
  • dietary guidelines
  • public policy
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